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Is it ok to show a project that I am doing for a jam and ask how it might be improved? Its basically done but input from others would be nice

It depends on the jam rules.

Update: The rules don't say anything about sharing your game before the due date. In fact, there are already some submissions on the jam page.

Go ahead

its this one https://itch.io/jam/20-second-game-jam-2024 Well made it 'public' anyway :)